this is my journal ... i write it as i go ... it has typos ... it's not perfect ... but then ... neither am i


Another One Bites the Dust
August 14, 1999
9:51 a.m.

 
 
     The story I've been working on is now officially a story in search of a title. I finished the first draft mere minutes ago. As I told Charles Eckert yesterday, I'm pretty sure it meets all the requirements of what Anne Lamott calls a "Shitty First Draft."

     But this is a good thing. Sure it is.


        


     Kris Rusch and Dean Smith say to write a short story a week, and mail it off. They say if you do this, you will sell. I tend to agree with them, but I also hear and understand the hue and cry of people who say that's too hard, and that the work will be shoddy if rushed like that.

     Sometimes--maybe a lot more often than not--that's true.

     The first draft of my last story, for one ornery smelling example.

     But I suggest that rather than argue about the specific "hows", we look at the intent of Kris and Dean's proposal. The goal behind this approach is to develop a working environment that results in the production line constantly spitting out material. That's called "being a professional."

     I rarely write a story in a week's time.

     But when looked at over the course of several months, I think I average somewhere between 9-12 days between times when a new story is available for the market. This means I generally have several projects going at once. It took me two months+ to write "1 is True", but in that timeframe I also wrote "Just Say When" and put the finishing touches on "Phantom Lives" and wrote something else in there, too ... don't remember what it was.

     Oh...duh.

     I also wrote three *#@@!@! drafts of this untitled story.

     And during this last draft, I plotted another story (which actually has a working title, you'll be glad to hear--"For Love or For Mercy"--that may or may not stick around).

     I expect I'll write the first draft of "Love/Mercy" before I go back and do the second draft of the one I just finished. Then I'll write the second draft of "Love/Mercy."

     In the end, I'll be putting out a story about every 10 days (not quite Kris and Deanish, but nothing to sneeze at). And each story will have had a 20-30 day incubation period. Of course, maybe one or both of these stories will need a third draft. That's fine.

     I'll just start another story in there somewhere, and come out of it still averaging a story every 10-12 days at worst.

     The lesson: Don't get caught up in rhetoric. Just write. Do your best.

     Things will work out.


        


     Have a good weekend.




E-Mail



Daily Persistence is © Ron Collins

MORE ENTRIES


"You need to know, confidently, that during revision you can fix anything, change anything to suit yourself."

George Garrett
Letters to a Fiction Writer




BACK TO