Following the Master Plan
September 6, 2001
7:18 a.m.
As you can tell from the little blurbs I've been dropping into Mike Jasper's 1/24/30 Dare section of my latest entries, I'm doing another pass through Glamour of the God-Touched. I'm really having a good time, because I think it's a pretty good book. Mostly, I'm just reading, and making a few modifications here and there. Of those, I would say 95% are fairly straightforward cuts of words. I can be a little on the wordy side if I don't pay enough attention, but then, can't we all? I did run into some pretty intensive work the past two days, though. Mostly dialog, and most of that going into deeper characterization. And I added a bit of a plot enhancement back in the first fifty pages or so. But overall, I'm really pleased that this book has held up in this reading. My master plan proceeds. Muuuuuaaaaahahahahahahahahahha.  
Have a great day.  Don't Go off the Cliff, Ron Daily Persistence is © Ron Collins |
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